Comments for Very Short Novels

Comment on Shadow Brother by porqueno

porqueno — Thu, 13 Jun 2013 01:22:20 +0000

damn good…

Comment on Night Doctors by urvi

urvi — Fri, 07 Jun 2013 11:04:47 +0000

It’s was so nice and I love it so much.

Comment on Kama Sutra for Beginners by srinath

srinath — Wed, 15 May 2013 19:33:20 +0000

when i fucked my girlfriend varsha for the first time i could not satisfy her but after the ideas of ks we made it

Comment on Christmas Roulette by OmbudsBen

OmbudsBen — Sun, 28 Apr 2013 20:25:05 +0000

Tough call on the best flick, but best movie santa is easy–the merry Claus entering a 1960 Manhattan bar in The Apartment and ordering a double because “my sleigh is double parked!” ho ho ho.

Comment on Under the Bed by Xxamamiya

Xxamamiya — Tue, 19 Mar 2013 11:10:21 +0000

AMAZING !
Looking for PG-13 NOVELS and i bumped into this. It gives me creeps haha. Thingking a child is under the bed XD

Comment on Shadow Brother by Talkalittledo - For Life Is Funny.

Talkalittledo - For Life Is Funny. — Sat, 02 Mar 2013 02:04:49 +0000

Hi, I just discovered you ‘very short novels’ by chance. I love it. The stories are unique and crisp. Going to read all of them over the week-end.

Comment on Full Body Massage by minus16

minus16 — Fri, 01 Mar 2013 18:18:58 +0000

Loved the fable quality of the story.

Comment on Christmas Roulette by chosenrebel

chosenrebel — Sat, 23 Feb 2013 00:28:59 +0000

Sounds like Michael had an evil and sadistic father. Is that what Michael was telling him?

Comment on The Cost by Anonymous

Anonymous — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 14:08:33 +0000

ge lost asl

Comment on The Cost by bandido

bandido — Fri, 01 Feb 2013 11:36:40 +0000

hi david,i just a first timer reader to ur novel’s,..its nice and wonderful,..hope u have a clearer mind to write novels again…

Comment on Christmas Roulette by NyNy

NyNy — Thu, 24 Jan 2013 16:33:49 +0000

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Comment on Christmas Roulette by fshiner

fshiner — Tue, 15 Jan 2013 10:58:56 +0000

Cheers man, keep up the good work!

Comment on Readers’ Choice by Emily

Emily — Sat, 12 Jan 2013 21:15:58 +0000

Hi David! I’ve been missing you with no market, so thought I’d check for new novels- Christmas, heavy heavy. Interesting because it sounded like your voice behind it, unlike many of the novels. I’ve shared your blog with folks and I’ll keep recommending it, so hopefully you’ll find some new readers! Wishing you well and see you soon again.

Thank you so much, Emily. I send people your way all the time too. Can’t wait to see you again. Happy New Year!
–David

Comment on Christmas Roulette by fshiner

fshiner — Mon, 07 Jan 2013 18:07:54 +0000

I really enjoyed this man. If you’re interested, I too have recently set up a wordpress blog involving short stories and general musings. I would love to hear your thoughts, if you would be as kind as to give it a bit of a read!

Thanks, Fionn

Blog: http://fshiner.wordpress.com/

I’ll check it out, Fionn. Thanks for the tip.
–David

Comment on Christmas Roulette by grantman

grantman — Mon, 31 Dec 2012 14:38:11 +0000

He lives to play roulette! Happy Holidays; though I doubt after creating this your head was in a very festive mood! I know, no link to the real world.But one wonders how far we are at times from slay bells jingling to bullets jangling in our pockets as an accepted festive holiday metaphor!

Grantman

“Slay bells.” Cute. Good to see you again, Grantman. Happy New Year.
–David

Comment on Christmas Roulette by Mark Gallagher

Mark Gallagher — Mon, 31 Dec 2012 09:16:17 +0000

Thanks for this holiday surprise, David. Maybe I shouldn’t have read it right before bed. I hope we’ll see more very short novels in the new year.

I hope so too, Mark. (None so far, but stay tuned.)
–David

Comment on Neighbors Forever by aicha ouakkas

aicha ouakkas — Sun, 16 Dec 2012 16:56:21 +0000

I am ouakkas aicha

Comment on Neighbors Forever by aicha

aicha — Sun, 16 Dec 2012 16:39:56 +0000

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Comment on Neighbors Forever by Anonymous

Anonymous — Sun, 16 Dec 2012 16:33:48 +0000

it’me aicha ouakkas nadia zandy is my freind at morocco ;I want to call her but I have not her phone

Comment on Tunnel of Love by Lilo

Lilo — Mon, 03 Dec 2012 09:57:42 +0000

Enjoyed this very much. Just reminded me how easily relations are made, how easily ties can be broken and strengthened, when rain pours and sun shines. Thanks…

Comment on Small News by SAMY

SAMY — Fri, 02 Nov 2012 19:20:36 +0000

daily good if god willing

Comment on Tunnel of Love by Anonymous

Anonymous — Sun, 30 Sep 2012 17:08:53 +0000

good job i love it.

Comment on Night Doctors by emerald

emerald — Fri, 14 Sep 2012 07:38:48 +0000

etchous!

Comment on Short Superman by chosenrebel

chosenrebel — Sun, 02 Sep 2012 00:09:10 +0000

How many of us live out fantasies in our minds and self-sabotage all our dreams with destructive choices that ensure that no miracles dot our lives and transform fantasies into realities. Thanks for the story. Sobering.

Comment on The Cost by Mario

Mario — Sat, 11 Aug 2012 12:19:45 +0000

lol you’re an idiot

Comment on Neighbors Forever by Anonymous

Anonymous — Thu, 09 Aug 2012 02:03:51 +0000

who is the author anyway?

Comment on The Cost by Nourhan Ibrahim

Nourhan Ibrahim — Tue, 07 Aug 2012 15:32:25 +0000

Nice to hear you again sir!
This is a wonderful story. Thanks

Comment on I, Witness by Pieter

Pieter — Thu, 19 Jul 2012 09:17:19 +0000

Very well writen…found this site and loving it

Comment on Contact Me by madhuripratinidhi

madhuripratinidhi — Mon, 25 Jun 2012 14:07:51 +0000

Hey there Mr. David! I’m highly impressed with your fresh and novel style of writing. I tried and eventually managed to frame a very short novel, roughly about 295 words. So yay ! Can I tell you how glad I am to stumble across your way. You’re a star.

Talk soon. Regards and grin !

- yours in literature zone,

Madhuri

Comment on Neighbors Forever by Anonymous

Anonymous — Sun, 20 May 2012 02:18:16 +0000

althought this novels is shot, but i really like it because of its interesting characters

Comment on Boy on the Roof by Ramashree

Ramashree — Sat, 12 May 2012 05:38:45 +0000

nice story…….

Comment on Contact Me by stillt27

stillt27 — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 15:43:51 +0000

I understand in some of my previous posts you have seen that most of my sources come from sources other then academic search premier, but that is because no information regarding my topic is showing up on there.

Comment on Contact Me by stillt27

stillt27 — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 15:02:30 +0000

Okay that is fine, I just feel that my introduction is basically letting the people know information on gangs, like the background history and i was wondering was i wrong for giving that information?

Comment on Contact Me by davidbdale

davidbdale — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 15:00:35 +0000

I’m afraid not at this time. I have obligations right up until 2 when we are scheduled to meet. We can look at it together when I see you and you can revise on the basis of what we discuss.

Comment on Contact Me by stillt27

stillt27 — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 14:58:47 +0000

Thank you, and also can you please quickly comment on my research paper and let me know what I am doing wrong so far, and to lead me on the right track?

Comment on Contact Me by davidbdale

davidbdale — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 08:39:16 +0000

Yes, Tyson. That’s exactly what you’re supposed to do.

Comment on Contact Me by stillt27

stillt27 — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 05:56:39 +0000

Professor, I was wondering for our research paper, can we use most of the information that is in our Causal paper, Definition essay, and any other research we have used in previous papers about our topic?

Comment on The Cost by Damyanti

Damyanti — Mon, 02 Apr 2012 07:28:03 +0000

The last line is so powerful. Excellent work! ---Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012 Amlokiblogs

Comment on Salt Toast by Taru

Taru — Sat, 31 Mar 2012 23:38:55 +0000

Hello, I really enjoyed this novel, but some parts kept me wondering (except for the rather horrible after explanation, of course) “the heedless groom in black has no idea he doesn’t belong. ” Doesn’t belong- but where? Beside his daughter, in the picture, any where? Or is it supposed to be ambiguous? And for the moment, “single”, (sorry, I’m being really stupid here), does it imply that the picture is taken before they are officially married?

Thanks, Taru, for your questions. I’m glad you weren’t fooled by my explanations to fdana.
Everything said here is the father’s opinion, of course. I believe he means only that the groom does not belong in a wedding picture with the father’s daughter. In other words, is the wrong man for her to marry. As for “for the moment, single,” yes, you have it just right: still single in the picture taken before the ceremony. Come back any time!
–David

Comment on Contact Me by strihc

strihc — Fri, 30 Mar 2012 06:31:13 +0000

Great site, mega concept. Will keep calling back. On my follow list.

Thanks, Strihc. I’m glad I have your interest.
–David

Comment on Box of What You Need by Anonymous

Anonymous — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 14:15:36 +0000

so nyc of d story….. sweet….

Comment on Box of What You Need by Anonymous

Anonymous — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 14:15:06 +0000

sop nyc of d story….. sweet….

Comment on Neighbors Forever by Anonymous

Anonymous — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 14:00:48 +0000

Comment on Neighbors Forever by Anonymous

Anonymous — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 14:00:25 +0000

a sweet ….nyc novel….

Comment on Neighbors Forever by Heather

Heather — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 03:41:13 +0000

I love to read your novel. You had a great imagination i can’t describe it. I need a lot of time to learn from you.

Comment on Our Littler Town by nursemyra

nursemyra — Fri, 09 Mar 2012 07:39:34 +0000

I’m rather gullible and easily flattered….

Not to fear. I’m quite sincere.
–David

Comment on The Cost by Anonymous

Anonymous — Thu, 08 Mar 2012 21:36:20 +0000

excellent. thank you

Happy to provide!
–David

Comment on Our Littler Town by nursemyra

nursemyra — Thu, 08 Mar 2012 21:00:35 +0000

It’s actually a pretty scary proposition if you ask me

Yes, ’tis. And I do ask you. I write these things exclusively to ask you.
–David

Comment on The Cost by nursemyra

nursemyra — Thu, 08 Mar 2012 07:52:40 +0000

excellent story David.

Myra!
–David

Comment on The Cost by Anonymous

Anonymous — Mon, 05 Mar 2012 15:52:26 +0000

Hey welcome back,,, you have been missed!! The piece reminded me of of Ignaz Semmelewis who tried to tell the hospital staff if they just washed their hands with a little chlorinated water deaths from infection would drop precipitously and John Snow who fought to tell everyone Cholera was caused by bad water!! Oh these unsung heroes, scorned in their day and pretty much forgotten in ours!! What a difference they could have made!!
grantman

Hey, Grantman! I’ve missed you too. It’s nice to see you keeping alive the memory of forgotten heroes. Obviously you’re quite loyal: you waited months for me to post another Novel and wasted no time letting me know you had seen it. I thank you, sir.
–David